Free write-1/6/11

After looking at my argumentative essay response for Fredrick  Douglas there are lots of things I did good and things I did bad. Some of the things I did good are not straying off of the topic. Some things that I did bad are not always writing in third person, not capitalize correctly and some of my paragraphs weren't arguments. Also I used past tense a lot. I will fix and do better to not do them in my next essay. If I can fix those my essay will be a lot better.